写作对于高三教学来说是很重要的, 同时也是最棘手的,学生怕写,老师怕批. 我觉得要精炼,精批, 凡写则详批,凡批则详讲. 让好的作文得以赏析,不足的让大家一起来修改, 这样可以激励好的同学,同时鼓励差的同学. 最近学生写了一篇关于孩子做家务事该不该要钱的议论文. 我花了很多的时间进行了批改. 结果没有令我太失望,我发现了一些好句. 作为普通中学的学生,我觉得学生也算是努力了, 从中我感觉到了学生的一种欲望, 那就是试图用好的句子结构表达内容. 现与大家一起分享:

1.        If not, it will make children want money whenever they do anything, which will interfere with the development of children’s personality.(WJL)

2.        It can teach them how to undertake the responsibility as well.(GXB)

3.        That parents give money to their children will lead to their children asking for money for doing anything.(YCF)

4.        It is a good chance for us to learn the way of managing financial affairs , which can help us have enough experience to compete with others in the future.(DQ)

5.        If children do housework for money, they will develop the habit that they do things just for money, which will interfere with their development of character.(WZ)

6.        It will lead to the fact that children always want money for whatever children are asked to do.(HY)

7.        The consequence of this behavior is that students will be accustomed to asking for money whenever they do whatever they should do.(CXD)

8.        What we should do is helping our parents reduce their housework instead of increasing their work.(LM)

9.        Those who oppose it think that every family member should share the housework.(XL)

10.     They won’t know how to take care of others, and they will do nothing if not paid.(XTT)

11.     Helping parents to do housework is the thing they must do as family members.(ZMM)

12.     If we take the money, it will lead to the result that children will take the money when they do anything.(TDD)

13.     They may want to be paid when they do anything, interfering with the development of ---.(JZ)

14.     In addition, it will cause children to get paid for whatever they do..(CJC)

15.     As for me, after children do some housework, parents can give them some money as praise, which may encourage them to be hardworking.(ZDD)

当然也有明显的错句

17.     40 percent of the students who are for the idea that we should take the money.

18.     Because children should take charge of homework.

19.     Recently we have had a discussion about helping parents do housework get or not get money.

20.     If they get paid after doing everything will develop the bad habit.

21.     We have had a discussion about help parents do housework whether or not take money.

22.     On the other hand, by experiencing the hardship of work, which helps them to learn to take responsibility and treasure money.

23.     There are 40% students are in favor of the idea that ---can---

  我与学生分享了一堂课,大家反应很积极, 我也很快乐.